Hi everyone,
My work is on FACEBOOK. The paintings are oil and acrylics. Unfortunately, my work has slowed down due to the ataxia, but I'm still at it. the paintings can be seen at: http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=97035&id=505661569&re...
Be well, Al
I love writing Poetry....please let me know what you think and be as objective as you can. Much appreciated ;)
These Days and These Moments......
I cannot explain my feelings right now, frustrating this I find
One minute we are together, the next you feel you are lagging behind
Doesnt matter who I would be with, these days and moments would exist
I want you to know that it isnt you, I say the wrong things and could eat my fist
I hear the immortal "dont do this!" from your lips, I do not understand
Why for do you say these words???, I want you to know this day and moment isnt planned
Moments like this I am in familiar territory, when left to my own devices - Content
I know not where I am, land of the unknown almost and any emotion i had was lent
For your sake, I try so hard for this not to happen - It happens anyhow
I ask you to let me in, promise that I will not hurt you knowingly and only this allow
It must be hard for you when on these days, I apprecciate
It is I that is the one - My lack of feeling at times I think I dictate
This is merely a knee jerk reaction to your response, to my day and my moment
Problems exist which I cannot put into words, choose to play perhaps ever the ignorant
Whilst I am finding my feet and accepting myself
Please dont ever feel that I am leaving you on a shelf
During these days and these moments leave me be, no texts or calls are required
I will be conscious you are not around, rest assured. Your insecurities at this moment go undesired
I will come back, just leave me be
Let me deal with me - Just being me
Like I told you, I do not really know that much about poetry, but both these are really heartfelt and touching.
I wish I had a way with words and it is obviously very therapeutic for you both.
Well done and look forward to the next installment.
Love Lit
Tina Cox said:I love writing Poetry....please let me know what you think and be as objective as you can. Much appreciated ;)
These Days and These Moments......
I cannot explain my feelings right now, frustrating this I find
One minute we are together, the next you feel you are lagging behind
Doesnt matter who I would be with, these days and moments would exist
I want you to know that it isnt you, I say the wrong things and could eat my fist
I hear the immortal "dont do this!" from your lips, I do not understand
Why for do you say these words???, I want you to know this day and moment isnt planned
Moments like this I am in familiar territory, when left to my own devices - Content
I know not where I am, land of the unknown almost and any emotion i had was lent
For your sake, I try so hard for this not to happen - It happens anyhow
I ask you to let me in, promise that I will not hurt you knowingly and only this allow
It must be hard for you when on these days, I apprecciate
It is I that is the one - My lack of feeling at times I think I dictate
This is merely a knee jerk reaction to your response, to my day and my moment
Problems exist which I cannot put into words, choose to play perhaps ever the ignorant
Whilst I am finding my feet and accepting myself
Please dont ever feel that I am leaving you on a shelf
During these days and these moments leave me be, no texts or calls are required
I will be conscious you are not around, rest assured. Your insecurities at this moment go undesired
I will come back, just leave me be
Let me deal with me - Just being me



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